Wednesday, November 21, 2007

Poem by Micheal adapted from A.J. Hynard's Poem

...And a plane soaring through the air,
And children screaming as they run,
And a tree waving at us,
And a park waiting to be played on,
And a sandpit waiting to be built on,
And monkey-bars swinging to and fro,
And logs that have been stepped on,
And music singing through the air,
And birds chirping their cheerful songs,
And a mailbox eating up the mail,
And a car waiting in the driveway,
And children screaming as they run,
And a plane soaring through the air...

by Micheal ~ Year 3

2 comments:

  1. Great poem Micheal --- really enjoyed the sounds and visions you created.

    Mr Robertson

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  2. FEEDBACK FROM ROOM 10 TEACHER KELVIN ROAD SCHOOL
    Hi Mrs Raman and Children in Room 12



    I have just been sitting here, after school, listening to your music and watching the photos of the Whanau Evening….



    I have also just read your poems and stories. I am so impressed with the high standard of your writing ….. I get a special thrill reading writing by children I used to teach when they were younger. Well done to you all.



    Mrs Libbie Folau
    Room 10
    Kelvin Road School

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