Shared Writing by Room 12 21/03/2007

Did You Ever Look at . . .

by Room 12 2007

Did you ever look at the rainbow?
What did you see?
I saw beautiful colours stretching its arms around the world.
Sometimes, if I look very closely, I can see the reflection of my lovely smile.

Did you ever look at the moon at night?
What did you see?
I saw a giant banana shining brightly.
Sometimes, if you look very closely, you will think it is smiling down at you.

Did you ever look at the wet green grass?
What did you see?
I saw a slippery soft mat under my feet.
Sometimes, if you look very closely, you will see the teardrops from the sky.

Adapted from Writing Model below
Did You Ever Look at . . . By Trista

Did you ever look at the stars in the sky?
What did you see?
I saw the Big Dipper, and the Little Dipper.
Sometimes, if I look very closely, I see the shape of my face.

Did you ever look at the sky on an afternoon?
What did you see?
I saw children in a train and a very big castle.
Sometimes, if you look very closely, you may see your beautiful face.

Did you ever look in the mirror?
What did you see?
I saw my beautiful skin, blond hair, and hazel eyes.
Sometimes, if you look very closely, you will know that you are truly beautiful, too!